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Sintax Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
any grammar mistakes?
My mother has always tried to have me play and win sports. Sending me to tennis camps (more like concentration camps) and trying out for basketball and soccer teams I don’t even want to play in. Why should I guarantee something I don’t want to do? Well, my ingenious mother has come up with non-argue reasons why I should catch the breeze. First of all, my body might turn to useless fat, and pretty soon I would fall over in a 10 feet race. Also, being a sports superstar would turn me to the awesome guy in middle school. Finally, there are many good things about exercising. If you exercise, you will be less prone to heart attacks and have extreme flexibility to do back flips in school. These are also the reasons why I want to play outside some more. How should I do it? Well, starting January 1st, I would go to the backyard and play soccer or “Try to kill Tony” with my brother. On weekends, I would go to the gymnasium and play basketball, lose to Luke in tennis, and romp around in a sandy playground. Sounds like torture? Don’t worry, it just gets worse.
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" 10-foot race. (Use the singular form because it functions as an adjective in front of the noun. ) Would turn me INto the awesome guy in middle school.
- " 10-foot race.
- (Use the singular form because it functions as an adjective in front of the noun.
- ) Would turn me INto the awesome guy in middle school.
- " January 1, not 1st.
- " I think that's all of them.
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Second sentence is a fragment; connect the first two with "by."
Change "non-argue" to "unarguable."
10-foot race. (Use the singular form because it functions as an adjective in front of the noun. If you put it after, you can stay with "feet." Although I wouldn't advise that, because then it makes it seem like people with ten feet are running.)
Would turn me INto the awesome guy in mid
Change "non-argue" to "unarguable."
10-foot race. (Use the singular form because it functions as an adjective in front of the noun. If you put it after, you can stay with "feet." Although I wouldn't advise that, because then it makes it seem like people with ten feet are running.)
Would turn me INto the awesome guy in mid
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