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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Any grammar issues here?
Sorry for the childish story and the sentence structure.
There is a war happening in the space. The unknown aliens are invading our own planet, the Earth. Therefore, the human race had to protect their planet. They had a plan to train some soldiers to keep aliens from arriving here. They thought genetic engineering as one option. Also, they wanted to make a computerized person so they transplanted some computer chips into their brain. As a result, very powerful human weapen has developed.
There is a war happening in the space. The unknown aliens are invading our own planet, the Earth. Therefore, the human race had to protect their planet. They had a plan to train some soldiers to keep aliens from arriving here. They thought genetic engineering as one option. Also, they wanted to make a computerized person so they transplanted some computer chips into their brain. As a result, very powerful human weapen has developed.
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There was a war in space, and unknown aliens were invading our own planet, Earth. To protect Earth, the human race planned to train soldiers, and they thought that genetic engineering was one option. They also wanted to create a computerized human, so they placed computer chips in soldiers' brains.
- There was a war in space, and unknown aliens were invading our own planet, Earth.
- To protect Earth, the human race planned to train soldiers, and they thought that genetic engineering was one option.
- They also wanted to create a computerized human, so they placed computer chips in soldiers' brains.
- As a result, a very powerful human weapon was developed.
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There was a war in space, and unknown aliens were invading our own planet, Earth. To protect Earth, the human race planned to train soldiers, and they thought that genetic engineering was one option. They also wanted to create a computerized human, so they placed computer chips in soldiers' brains. As a result, a very powerful human weapon was developed.
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