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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Any gramatical mistakes?

Hi!

Are there any gramatical mistakes in my sentence?

In comparison with the previous academic year, the proportion of prisoners involved in educational programmes has increased, namely, on September 1, 2013 25% of all prisoners were involved in the educational programmes but on September 1, 2014 – 27% of all prisoners were involved.



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In comparison with the previous academic year This seems to flow better: Compared to the previous academic year. You have a run-on sentence. programmes has increased.

— Philip

  • In comparison with the previous academic year This seems to flow better: Compared to the previous academic year.
  • You have a run-on sentence.
  • programmes has increased.
  • On September 1....
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In comparison with the previous academic year This seems to flow better: Compared to the previous academic year. You have a run-on sentence. Fix: ....programmes has increased. On September 1....
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