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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Any gramatical mistakes?

Hi!

Is this sentence gramatically correct?

She rents the two-room apartment together with her life partner and two other guys, thereby she lives in one room with the child and her life partner, but in the other room lives both guys.

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No. Say eg She rents the two-room apartment together with her life partner and two other guys. She lives in one room with the child and her life partner, and in the other room live the two guys.

  • No.
  • Say eg She rents the two-room apartment together with her life partner and two other guys.
  • She lives in one room with the child and her life partner, and in the other room live the two guys.
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No. Say
eg She rents the two-room apartment together with her life partner and two other guys. She lives in one room with the child and her life partner, and in the other room live the two guys.

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