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Chevy Bel Air 01 Posted 19 years ago
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The Three Things
Her eyes are blue like the ocean
Her hair is dark that' s weakes my emotion
Her skin is soft like a fluffy pillow
That makes me crazy that is her flow
His face looks funny like a pig tailed macaque
His hair is brown that is a cake that he bakes like a babe
He wears long trousers in size of xxl like a gangsta rapper
That seems to me like a youngster spinner
He is a very stupid selfish boy
He threats everybody like toy
He takes the piss out of professor Macko
He is in the class the biggest macho
She is in our class the little princess
She is the most beautiful in the midwest
She fights for the rights of the weakest
For my chick I' m training my bizeps
Her eyes are blue like the ocean
Her hair is dark that' s weakes my emotion
Her skin is soft like a fluffy pillow
That makes me crazy that is her flow
His face looks funny like a pig tailed macaque
His hair is brown that is a cake that he bakes like a babe
He wears long trousers in size of xxl like a gangsta rapper
That seems to me like a youngster spinner
He is a very stupid selfish boy
He threats everybody like toy
He takes the piss out of professor Macko
He is in the class the biggest macho
She is in our class the little princess
She is the most beautiful in the midwest
She fights for the rights of the weakest
For my chick I' m training my bizeps
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The yellow highlights are errors or just rather difficult to understand your meaning. Your rhyme scheme is not consistant. the blue highlighted words do not rhyme.
- The yellow highlights are errors or just rather difficult to understand your meaning.
- Your rhyme scheme is not consistant.
- the blue highlighted words do not rhyme.
- Her eyes are blue like the ocean Her hair is dark that' s weakes my emotion Her skin is soft like a fluffy pillow That makes me crazy that is her flow His face looks funny like a pig tailed macaque His hair is brown that is a cake that he bakes like a babe He wears long trousers in size of *** like a gangsta rapper That seems to me like a youngster spinner He is a very stupid selfish boy He threats everybody like toy He takes the *** out of professor Macko He is in the class the biggest macho She is in our class the little princess She is the most beautiful in the midwest She fights for the rights of the weakest For my chick I' m training my biceps - spelling
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The yellow highlights are errors or just rather difficult to understand your meaning. Your rhyme scheme is not consistant. the blue highlighted words do not rhyme.
Her eyes are blue like the ocean
Her hair is dark that' s weakes my emotion
Her skin is soft like a fluffy pillow
That makes me crazy that is her flow
His face looks funny like a pig tailed macaque
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Her eyes are blue like the ocean
Her hair is dark that' s weakes my emotion
Her skin is soft like a fluffy pillow
That makes me crazy that is her flow
His face looks funny like a pig tailed macaque
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At first, thanks for your help nona the brit.
Her hair is dark that' s weakes my emotion
It must be that wakes my emotion
That makes me crazy that is her flow
Here I mean with “flow” the matter she moves or goes
His hair is brown that is a cake that he bakes like a babe
The color of the boy’ s hair is brown. And as there are also cakes in brown,
Her hair is dark that' s weakes my emotion
It must be that wakes my emotion
That makes me crazy that is her flow
Here I mean with “flow” the matter she moves or goes
His hair is brown that is a cake that he bakes like a babe
The color of the boy’ s hair is brown. And as there are also cakes in brown,
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Her hair is dark that' s weakes my emotion
It must be that wakes my emotion - ok that makes more sense
It must be that wakes my emotion - ok that makes more sense
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"- a bit convoluted, not clear from what you say here.also I find a bit weird - I don't think it's a compliment to have hair like a cake, but perhaps that cultural. Babe is a bit of an odd word here, it doesn't really just mean 'woman/girlfriend' it's rather cheesy old-fashioned slang. Lots of women would find it offensive."
The hair like cake shouldn't be a compliment. The boy ma
The hair like cake shouldn't be a compliment. The boy ma
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Chorus: Brian And Tony Gold (Shaggy)
Hey **** lady, I like your flow
Your body's bangin, out of controoooooool!!! (Uh!)
You put it on me (That's right) ceiling to floor
Only you can make me, screamin back for moooooore!!!
He uses flow, too
Hey **** lady, I like your flow
Your body's bangin, out of controoooooool!!! (Uh!)
You put it on me (That's right) ceiling to floor
Only you can make me, screamin back for moooooore!!!
He uses flow, too
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