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Shoaib Bin Rashid Posted 11 years ago
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These little kids are making up a plan so that they can survive in our society. In spite of all the hurdles, they are trying their best not to get demolished in this human society. Let us take this opportunity and help them to overcome all these hurdles. And make a easy way for them.
  

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Shoaib Bin Rashid in this human society I would say "by society".... ) Shoaib Bin Rashid all these hurdles. "these hurdles" is fine...

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  • Shoaib Bin Rashid in this human society I would say "by society"....
  • ) Shoaib Bin Rashid all these hurdles.
  • "these hurdles" is fine...
  • use "all" if you want to say this phrase emphatically Shoaib Bin Rashid a easy "an" easy...
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Shoaib Bin Rashid in this human society
I would say "by society".... (This is also a bit redundant as society is mentioned in the sentence before.)
Shoaib Bin Rashidall these hurdles.
"these hurdles" is fine... use "all" if you want to say this phrase emphatically
Shoaib Bin Rashida easy
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These little kids are making up a plan (make up = invent, make a fictional account, a story; make = create)

Suggestion:
These little kids are making a plan so that they can survive in our society in spite of many difficulties. (demolish is used for buildings or cars, not people.)
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Here is the corrected one!
These little kids are making a plan so that they can survive in our society in spite of many difficulties, they are trying their best not to get defeated by human society. Let us take this opportunity and help them to overcome all. And make their lives simple just like they planned!
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These little kids are making a plan so that they can survive in our society in spite of many difficulties, (comma splice) they are trying their best not to get defeated by human society. Let us take this opportunity and help them to overcome all. And make their lives simple just like they planned!
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