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Masanori Takaoka Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

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Animals, such as wild horses, reindeer, and oxen could not live in Siberia. Therefore, carbon dioxide in permafrost soil would be released and this would cause global warming.
  

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Animals, such as wild horses, reindeer, and oxen , could not live in Siberia. Therefore, carbon dioxide in permafrost soil would be released and this would cause global warming. The grammar is OK, but the therefore does not compute.

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  • Animals, such as wild horses, reindeer, and oxen , could not live in Siberia.
  • Therefore, carbon dioxide in permafrost soil would be released and this would cause global warming.
  • The grammar is OK, but the therefore does not compute.
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Animals, such as wild horses, reindeer, and oxen, could not live in Siberia. Therefore, carbon dioxide in permafrost soil would be released and this would cause global warming.

The grammar is OK, but the therefore does not compute.
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The comma after 'animals' means you are saying
Animals (here are some examples of animals in case you don't know what an animal is) could not live in Siberia.

If you remove the comma you are saying
Animals like wild horses, reind
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