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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

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Looks like Donald Trump is going towards the White House with in a way faster pace than clinton. I was watching the commander chief forum recently on NBC news. Hillary Clinton admitted that she did make a mistake by giving the authority to go to war in Iraq; which killed over five thousands people leaving thousands fatally wounded and creating terrorist organization like ISIS. The Middle East would not be what it is today where innocent kids are becoming victims everyday. It's really embarrassing that she is still looking for an excuse saying we learn for the mistakes. She should never be allowed to be the president. I do understand that if Trump gets elected, he will deport all the undocumented immigrants right away which could be bad news for all the illegal immigrants.
  

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Your first sentence needs a subject and proper names should be capitalized. So much for the first line of your essay.

  • Your first sentence needs a subject and proper names should be capitalized.
  • So much for the first line of your essay.
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Your first sentence needs a subject and proper names should be capitalized. So much for the first line of your essay.

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