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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
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I am not sure about Jim coming to the party tomorrow. It would be nice if he came. We would have a lot of fun together. We would get drunk together.

  

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That's not wrong. This is a little more natural. I 'm not sure if Jim's coming to the party tomorrow.

— Clive

  • That's not wrong.
  • This is a little more natural.
  • I 'm not sure if Jim's coming to the party tomorrow.
  • It'd be nice if he did.
  • We'd have a lot of fun and get drunk together.
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That's not wrong.

This is a little more natural.

I'm not sure if Jim's coming to the party tomorrow. It'd be nice if he did. We'd have a lot of fun and get drunk together.

Clive

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The original version sounds like you think he is not likely to come.

You latest version sounds like you think he is likely to come.

Clive

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