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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Any changes necessary?

Hello!

I would like to ask your opinion whether I must change anything in the following sentence:

On daily bases I consult people on astrology and, through reading of their maps, I shed some light onto situations and conditions which tend to create happenings in their life.

Much appreciated
  

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Anonymous I would like to ask your opinion whether I must change anything in the following sentence Yes, you must. For one thing, the correct phrase is 'on a daily basis ', but it is a phrase that you should forget: it is irritably long-winded. I consult people daily on astrology and, through casting their horoscope charts, I shed light on situations and conditions which tend to create events in their life.

  • Anonymous I would like to ask your opinion whether I must change anything in the following sentence Yes, you must.
  • For one thing, the correct phrase is 'on a daily basis ', but it is a phrase that you should forget: it is irritably long-winded.
  • I consult people daily on astrology and, through casting their horoscope charts, I shed light on situations and conditions which tend to create events in their life.
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AnonymousI would like to ask your opinion whether I must change anything in the following sentence
Yes, you must. For one thing, the correct phrase is 'on a daily basis', but it is a phrase that you should forget: it is irritably long-winded.

I consult people daily on astrology and, through casting their horoscope charts, I shed ligh

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