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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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The following sentence is part of a description of our company. Can I improve upon it? Is it grammatical?
The company XXXX is willing to issue guarantees and perform technical maintenance services, as well as deliver the products pursuant to an order, strives to improve the quality of services, to widen the assortment of qualitative products tendered and to explore a new area for sale.
Thank you!
The following sentence is part of a description of our company. Can I improve upon it? Is it grammatical?
The company XXXX is willing to issue guarantees and perform technical maintenance services, as well as deliver the products pursuant to an order, strives to improve the quality of services, to widen the assortment of qualitative products tendered and to explore a new area for sale.
Thank you!
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The *** Company issues guarantees and performs technical maintenance services, as well as delivers products on order. We strive to improve the quality of our services, to broaden the range of our quality products, and to explore new markets.
- The *** Company issues guarantees and performs technical maintenance services, as well as delivers products on order.
- We strive to improve the quality of our services, to broaden the range of our quality products, and to explore new markets.
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The *** Company issues guarantees and performs technical maintenance services, as well as delivers products on order. We strive to improve the quality of our services, to broaden the range of our quality products, and to explore new markets.
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