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Creativeguru Posted 18 years ago
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Any better way to write this??

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01b01i00Time you switched on to better profits.02i02b0-
  

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0Too informal. 02i 02b 02br 00but:02br 01b 01i 00switched on to better profits02i 02b 02br 00is a bit strange. 02br 00Is this a telecom ad?

— Marius Hancu

  • 0Too informal.
  • 02i 02b 02br 00but:02br 01b 01i 00switched on to better profits02i 02b 02br 00is a bit strange.
  • 02br 00Is this a telecom ad?
  • Then perhaps it could work.
  • They employ switching in their work.
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0Too informal. Use the full version:02br
01b01i00It's time you switched on to better profits.02i02b02br
00but:02br
01b01i00switched on to better profits02i02b02br
00is a bit strange. 02br
00Is this a telecom ad? Then perhaps it could work. They employ switching in their work.
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0No not telecom ad02br
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00How about this: 02br
00An exciting time for your business begins. Switch on now02br
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00I want to tell that from now your business will see high profit just switch on now 0-
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0If it is not an ad where you can claim that the object is understood, then switch what on now?0-
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0Basically it’s a modular switch company which is sending switch boxes to its dealers. so this line need to be written on the box0-
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10Basically it’s a modular switch company which is sending switch boxes to its dealers. so this line need to be written on the box12br
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10THAT is the type of information you should give us in the beginning. Audience, medium, purpose, type of message.02
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