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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
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Antonia: pink moistened cleaning rag

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00Is the underlined sentence correct and stylistically OK? Can you please read the rest of the paragraph and tell me if it is ok? Thanky ou very much02br
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00Difficult and tedious chores are the best cure for emotionally unstable husbands. Instead of driving around in their big cars, a 01u00pink moistened cleaning rag, should be tucked in their hands00.02u00 Nevertheless, what if they have got used to exclusively you being the one in your marriage who holds these sorts of objects in your hands? In the next sequel read about the prejudices of married men.0-
  

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02u 00> First, there sould be no comma between "rag" & "should". Then it's a bit strange, because it looks as it were the pink rag that was driving around... 02br 02br 00But wait for other propositions...

  • 02u 00> First, there sould be no comma between "rag" & "should".
  • Then it's a bit strange, because it looks as it were the pink rag that was driving around...
  • 02br 02br 00But wait for other propositions...
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0Hello, Antonia!02br
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00<Instead of driving around in their big cars, a 01u00pink moistened cleaning rag, should be tucked in their hands.02u00> First, there sould be no comma between "rag" & "should". Then it's a bit strange, because it looks as it were the pink rag that was driving around... 05002br
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00How about: "
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0 Thank you Pieanne 0-

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