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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
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Antonia: batallion
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00 Can you please help me with the underlined parts in the following: 02 br
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01 i 00 I wonder if there is any tactics by means of which you would be returned to life, now being more susceptible to small bites, 01 u 00 to unevenness/uneven 02 u 00 heart beats of the heart. Can you 01 u 00 handle the gun 00 , 02 u 00 in case you were attacked by that bear called emotions? Is it possible, at all, to refold, check the cracks, sew yourself up and check the stitches? There is 01 u 00 no 00 chivalrous battalion/battalion of knights 02 u 00 which would help you fix your chipped ego up and return on a new saddle, suddenly full of yourself. 02 i 02 br
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00 Are these phrases all right? Do you have a better idea if they are not all right?It refers to a 01 i 00 sensitive lover 02 i 00 . 02 br
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00 Can you please help me with the underlined parts in the following: 02 br
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01 i 00 I wonder if there is any tactics by means of which you would be returned to life, now being more susceptible to small bites, 01 u 00 to unevenness/uneven 02 u 00 heart beats of the heart. Can you 01 u 00 handle the gun 00 , 02 u 00 in case you were attacked by that bear called emotions? Is it possible, at all, to refold, check the cracks, sew yourself up and check the stitches? There is 01 u 00 no 00 chivalrous battalion/battalion of knights 02 u 00 which would help you fix your chipped ego up and return on a new saddle, suddenly full of yourself. 02 i 02 br
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00 Are these phrases all right? Do you have a better idea if they are not all right?It refers to a 01 i 00 sensitive lover 02 i 00 . 02 br
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00 Thank you 0-
Top answer
02 i 02 br 01 ul 02 br 01 li 00 "Unevenness" is a noun, not an adjective, so it couldn't be used to describe anything. Saying "heart beats of the heart" sounds too repetitive; just say either "heartbeats" or " beats of the heart". Using both "tactics" and "means" also sounds repetitive, just choose one or the other.
- 02 i 02 br 01 ul 02 br 01 li 00 "Unevenness" is a noun, not an adjective, so it couldn't be used to describe anything.
- Saying "heart beats of the heart" sounds too repetitive; just say either "heartbeats" or " beats of the heart".
- Using both "tactics" and "means" also sounds repetitive, just choose one or the other.
- I would use "could" instead of "would" as well.
- A subject should be included in the second clause, I wasn't sure what was appropriate given the context, so I just used "you" again..
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1 i 00 I wonder if there 01 font 00 is 02 font 00 any 01 font 00 tactics by means 02 font 00 of which you 01 font 00 would 02 font 00 be returned to life, now being more susceptible to small bites 01 font 00 , 02 font 00 01 u 00 to
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