0
Ellisa Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Answer for an interview.
Hello dear teachers! Please correct any ungrammatical sentence.
Thanks in advance ^^
My hobby is swimming. At first, I started swimming to lose some weight but now, it became my closest friend. Thanks to its close location, I go swimming whenever I'm in low mood. While I'm swimming, I can enjoy the sport with clear mind. I guess it's because I hear nothing but my breathing under the water. After I swim, I feel I am born again. I know I'm exaggerating too much but the word "refreshed" is quite short for what I feel at the moment. Then I get home or library and I can focus more on my studies. I dream to have my own swimmimg pool someday.
Thanks in advance ^^
My hobby is swimming. At first, I started swimming to lose some weight but now, it became my closest friend. Thanks to its close location, I go swimming whenever I'm in low mood. While I'm swimming, I can enjoy the sport with clear mind. I guess it's because I hear nothing but my breathing under the water. After I swim, I feel I am born again. I know I'm exaggerating too much but the word "refreshed" is quite short for what I feel at the moment. Then I get home or library and I can focus more on my studies. I dream to have my own swimmimg pool someday.
Top answer
My hobby is swimming. At first, I started swimming to lose weight, but now it is my favorite avocation. The pool is nearby, so I go swimming whenever I'm feeling low.
- My hobby is swimming.
- At first, I started swimming to lose weight, but now it is my favorite avocation.
- The pool is nearby, so I go swimming whenever I'm feeling low.
- While I'm swimming, I have a clear mind, probably because I hear nothing but my breathing underwater.
- After swimming, I feel born again.
Get the Weekly English Kit 📬
New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.
2 Answers
0
My hobby is swimming. At first, I started swimming to lose weight, but now it is my favorite avocation. The pool is nearby, so I go swimming whenever I'm feeling low. While I'm swimming, I have a clear mind, probably because I hear nothing but my breathing underwater. After swimming, I feel born again. I know I'm exaggerating, but the word "refreshed" is quite inadequate for what I feel at that
00
Related Questions