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Persona Grata Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

another's diary.

This is another's diary.

plz correct it~:)

hello!! everybody!!

i'm in frankfrut, germany. hihi.

(if spell is wrong, please close your eye. -_-;)

do everybody live heathy? well? hhh

i'm very missed koreapas and koreapas's people. (4dlf dksgoTdmf Qnsdlsep...EhdcPdls-_-)

europe's internet cafe is too expensive. 2000 won per 1hr

but this hotel's internet is free. hhh but only one computer......T-T

p.s thank to jung-sin-an-cha-ryu nim hh for san-gak-dea

foreigners are very curious and interested about this sam-gak-dae.

and very useful, too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thank you

and now is 6. am in korea????

is there any people now!?!?!?? kk
  

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Why don't you have a go agt correcting it yourself It's very informally written. To start with, the sentences need to start with capital letters and all the proper nouns need capital letters. Other than that, a couple of the verbs need sorting out.

— Nona the brit

  • Why don't you have a go agt correcting it yourself It's very informally written.
  • To start with, the sentences need to start with capital letters and all the proper nouns need capital letters.
  • Other than that, a couple of the verbs need sorting out.
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Why don't you have a go agt correcting it yourself Emotion: smile

It's very informally written. To start with, the sentences need to star
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