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Contiluo Posted 13 years ago
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another world

Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks!

The socioeconomic status of the families of elite students studying in prestigious schools is much higher than average. These gifted students are well nurtured by parents; yet unconcerned, even indifferent, about the world around them. For them, the girl who lives in the remote mountain village which was destroyed by mud flows and landslides is another world.
  

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The socioeconomic status of the families of elite students studying in prestigious schools is much higher than average. These gifted students are well nurtured by parents , yet unconcerned, even indifferent, about the world around them. For them, the girl who lives in the remote mountain village which was destroyed by mud flows and landslides lives in another world.

  • The socioeconomic status of the families of elite students studying in prestigious schools is much higher than average.
  • These gifted students are well nurtured by parents , yet unconcerned, even indifferent, about the world around them.
  • For them, the girl who lives in the remote mountain village which was destroyed by mud flows and landslides lives in another world.
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The socioeconomic status of the families of elite students studying in prestigious schools is much higher than average. These gifted students are well nurtured by parents, yet unconcerned, even indifferent, about the world around them. For them, the girl who lives in the remote mountain village which was destroyed by mud flows and landslides

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