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Ant_222 Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Another text from Star Heritage

Hello again.

As you see, I have resumed my work on the translation, so I hope you'll be able to look at the game quite soon...

This time I am asking for help with the following description:

"Not far from the ruins I noted a small house, over the door hanging a sign: "Jameson's shop".

Is it OK?

Thanks in advance,
Anton
  

Top answer

hanging over the door a sign:

  • hanging over the door a sign:
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hanging over the door a sign:
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or:
"Not far from the ruins, I noted a small house, a sign -- "Jameson's shop" -- hanging over its door.
or:
"Not far from the ruins, I noted a small house, a sign, "Jameson's shop, " hanging over its door.
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Thank you, optilang and Marius.
So, it appears it's only the word order that you didn't like... I'll also substitute "noticed" for "noted".

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