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Daden1789 Posted 17 years ago
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Franklin ran elected for state Senate in . When he ran for state senate he would campaign in his car, giving ten speeches a day. This would have been a happy time for most couples but not for Franklin and Eleanor. This is where they started to disconnect and spend hours away from each other. They both had their own friends and rarely spent time together. The worst thing that could happen to Eleanor happen. She found love letters from Lucy Mercer to . She was shocked because she never thought that would cheat on her. The only thing that saved their marriage was that agreed not to see Lucy Mercer again. Eleanor had grief about her disconnection with her husband and many other things. So she would spend more of her time, looking at a statue in a cemetery. The statue was of Henry Adams’s wife who died in suicide. The woman was called Grief. Eleanor also spent time with wounded soldiers, and treated them just like a mother would do. The person who gets credit for helping Eleanor with politics and learning how to give a speech without laughing was Louis Howe.
  

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Franklin ran in the election elected for state Senate in New York City. When he ran for state senate he would campaign in his car, giving ten speeches a day. This would have been a happy time for most couples but not for Franklin and Eleanor.

  • Franklin ran in the election elected for state Senate in New York City.
  • When he ran for state senate he would campaign in his car, giving ten speeches a day.
  • This would have been a happy time for most couples but not for Franklin and Eleanor.
  • This is when where they started to disconnect and spend hours away from each other.
  • They both had their own friends and rarely spent time together.
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Franklin ran in the election elected for state Senate in New York City. When he ran for state senate he would campaign in his car, giving ten speeches a day. This would have been a happy time for most couples but not for Franklin and Eleanor. This is when where they started to disconnect and spend hours away from each other. They both had their own friends a
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Franklin ran elected for state Senate in New York City. When he ran for state senate, he would campaign in his car, giving ten speeches a day. This would have been a happy time for most couples but not for Franklin and Eleanor. This is where they started to disconnect and spend hours away from each other. They both had their own friends and rarely spent time together. The worst thing
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cwtchbut you need a segway

This is a "segway":

What this author needs is a "segue":
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Oops. You are correct.
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I hate making mistakes. The second I saw your comment, I was embarrassed. I know the spelling of segue. Apparently, the marketing is effective. Maybe I can use my brain rattling accident as an excuse.

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