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Xiaopengyo Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Another sentence check

Sorry , I have another sentence which is not sure. Please help me to check it. Thanks a lot.

" The blood circulation has increased after the treatment."

" The blood circulation is increasing after the treatment. "

" The blood circulation has been increased after the treatment. "

Which one do you think sounds correct?
  

Top answer

, In my opinion, "increase" may not be the choice of verb in reference to blood circulation. Heart beats "increases". I would suggest "improve" in that sentence.

  • , In my opinion, "increase" may not be the choice of verb in reference to blood circulation.
  • Heart beats "increases".
  • I would suggest "improve" in that sentence.
  • That being said, I believe all 3 are possible.
  • " - The doctor checked the patient 10 minutes later.
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Hi ???,

In my opinion, "increase" may not be the choice of verb in reference to blood circulation. Heart beats "increases". I would suggest "improve" in that sentence. That being said, I believe all 3 are possible.

" The blood circulation has improved after the treatment." - The doctor checked the patient 10 minutes later.

" The blood circulation is improving
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[Y] I got it. Thank you very much. Very clear answers.

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