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Ppan Posted 21 years ago
Grammar

Another sentence

Hi,

Please let me know if the following sentence needs re-wording.

If I am admitted to the ____ School I will be very interested in establishing the same club on the campus to enrich the life of those who are interested.

thanks in advance,

/P
  

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It's OK, ppan, but I might polish it to something like: If I am admitted to ____ School, I would like to establish the same club for those on your campus who are interested.

— Mister Micawber

  • It's OK, ppan, but I might polish it to something like: If I am admitted to ____ School, I would like to establish the same club for those on your campus who are interested.
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It's OK, ppan, but I might polish it to something like:

If I am admitted to ____ School, I would like to establish the same club for those on your campus who are interested.
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