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Minnaloushe-Q Posted 22 years ago
Another Poem-untitled
On an endless path you walk,
To destination unknown.
Reach out, nothing
Nothing but your lingering hand.
Look ahead, nothing
Nothing but the anticipation within.
Shout, you voice is empty,
The silence is drowning
The mist is clouding
Nothing can pass,
Nothing will come out.
Another poem…needs more work…but it was an impulse of the moment kind of thing.
To destination unknown.
Reach out, nothing
Nothing but your lingering hand.
Look ahead, nothing
Nothing but the anticipation within.
Shout, you voice is empty,
The silence is drowning
The mist is clouding
Nothing can pass,
Nothing will come out.
Another poem…needs more work…but it was an impulse of the moment kind of thing.
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I enjoyed this poem. It creates a mysterious, atmosphere that causes the reader to anticipate what comes next. It seems complete as it stands.
- I enjoyed this poem.
- It creates a mysterious, atmosphere that causes the reader to anticipate what comes next.
- It seems complete as it stands.
- But as the author you know best.
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I enjoyed this poem.
It creates a mysterious, atmosphere that causes the reader to anticipate what comes next.
It seems complete as it stands.
But as the author you know best.
It creates a mysterious, atmosphere that causes the reader to anticipate what comes next.
It seems complete as it stands.
But as the author you know best.
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