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Bbser Posted 16 years ago
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Hi there,
I am trying to write a cover letter for a job a bit by a bit.
Can you help me make this openning paragraph nicer and corrent errors?
Do you think I am using a right tone? Feel free to make comments.
Best wishes, Bbser
Dear xxx : (shall I use a comma or a colon here?)
I hope that my resume could give you the impression that I am a qualified candidate for this position as a [job title] in Microsoft. Now I am glad to take this opportunity to explain some of my unique qualities that will make myself stand out.
I am trying to write a cover letter for a job a bit by a bit.
Can you help me make this openning paragraph nicer and corrent errors?
Do you think I am using a right tone? Feel free to make comments.
Best wishes, Bbser
Dear xxx : (shall I use a comma or a colon here?)
I hope that my resume could give you the impression that I am a qualified candidate for this position as a [job title] in Microsoft. Now I am glad to take this opportunity to explain some of my unique qualities that will make myself stand out.
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Dear Mr ***: Enclosed/Attached please find my resume for the position of [job title] at Microsoft , as advertised in/on [ location ] on [ date ]. Briefly, I feel that I am uniquely qualified for this position because....
- Dear Mr ***: Enclosed/Attached please find my resume for the position of [job title] at Microsoft , as advertised in/on [ location ] on [ date ].
- Briefly, I feel that I am uniquely qualified for this position because....
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Dear Mr ***:
Enclosed/Attached please find my resume for the position of [job title] at Microsoft, as advertised in/on [location] on [date].
Briefly, I feel that I am uniquely qualified for this position because....
Enclosed/Attached please find my resume for the position of [job title] at Microsoft, as advertised in/on [location] on [date].
Briefly, I feel that I am uniquely qualified for this position because....
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