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Abil Posted 16 years ago
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Another journalistic work
In another incident, on 15 August, a class nine girl student of L H School, Ms B was subjected to a raped attempt by Md. H and R – two settlers from L village.
When she resisted the rapists hit her, breaking one of her teeth. The main culprit of this incident is also at large.
Are there any mistakes and room for improvement? Thanks.
When she resisted the rapists hit her, breaking one of her teeth. The main culprit of this incident is also at large.
Are there any mistakes and room for improvement? Thanks.
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School by name Ms B was subjected to attempt of rape by Md H and R who are residents of L village. When she resisted, they hit and broke her one of teeth. The Main culprit is still at large.
- School by name Ms B was subjected to attempt of rape by Md H and R who are residents of L village.
- When she resisted, they hit and broke her one of teeth.
- The Main culprit is still at large.
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In another incident, on 15th August, a class nineth girl of L.H.School by name Ms B was subjected to attempt of rape by Md H and R who are residents of L village. When she resisted, they hit and broke her one of teeth. The Main culprit is still at large.
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