Another Goodbye

Hey, posted as a guest in another one of the sub-forums here, then had a browse and thought i might as well seak some opinions/comments on a poem i done a few years ago. I'd be grateful for any comments regarding my poem, critical or otherwise and also any little suggestions to improve it.



Another goodbye


I saw him with you walking hand in hand,
Right beside you, where I used to stand.
It tore me up to see you with someone new,
But I have to move on now - what else can I do?
To stay where I am at – I would only hurt more.
It's time for me now to close the door.
In time my pain will go away,
And at that time that's where it'll stay.
‘Cause Now that I've realized you're really gone
And I bid farewell... I'm moving on.


Thanks, Sy