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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing

another e- mail

0 Hello everybody,02br
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00 could you please help me with this e-mail which I have received. Would it be possible for you to correct it?02br
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00 Thanks in advance02br
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00 Mike02br
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00 Dear Sir:02br
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00 I am writing from ... We are users of Home Cash application from HVB. HVB has given to us your phone number to contact you.02br
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00 We have a problem with the Home Cash configuration. We have been using this program for some months in English without problem, but last Friday the configuration changed to Czech and we do not know how configure again to English. If you could give us instructions to do it, we would be grateful.02br
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00 Yours faithfully0-
  

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0I'm not convinced that I should be correcting an email that you have01u 00 received02u 00, Mike. 0-

  • 0I'm not convinced that I should be correcting an email that you have01u 00 received02u 00, Mike.
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0I'm not convinced that I should be correcting an email that you have01u00 received02u00, Mike. What is your purpose in doing so?0-
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0 To Mister Micawber02br
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00 I understand what you mean but I wonder if it wasn´t better not use any commas in the e- mail or instead of " Yours faithfully" "Yours sincerely". 02br
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00 p.s. It would help me improve my writing.0-
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0Commas are always needed to clarify statements and set out the structure of more complex utterances. They are appropriately used in this email.02br
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01i00Yours faithfully02i00 is traditionally used in business correspondence when the name of the addressee (as in 01i00Dear 01b00Sir02b02i00) is unknown. It is a
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0 Thank you ( Mister Micawber) for your reply.02br
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00 Do you think that the e- mail might have been written by a native speaker?0-
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0Not likely; there is some odd grammar.0-
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0 Why is it odd for a native speaker? What is wrong with the e- mail?02br
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1i00HVB has given to us02i00 should read 01i00HVB has given us02i02br
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01i00without problem02i00 should read 01i00without a/any problem02i02br
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01i00how configure again02i00 should read 01i00how to configure again02i00, and many na

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