Another descriptive writting of a place, correct it please

Instructions: I have to use the five sensories (smell, taste, touch, sight and sound) in a way that I let the reader imaginate the place.
Temuco
Temuco is a well-made town placed in the ninth region. First of all, this city has a great structure because of the beautiful buildings by the admirable brightness and colored spaces. Additionally, there are many craft fairs in this city with a lot of crafts that when you touch them, you realize that they all have a soft part because of the wood with what it was made and a rough part because of the wood. Also, the city has a damp, clean and perfumed fragrance, characteristic of the Araucania's region, making that you smell it any moment. Furthermore, Temuco has a big and tall shopping center with many shops and restaurants in it. One of them is a restaurant called "Coppelia". This restaurant could have one of the best ice creams because when I tasted one, it had a unique, sweet, bitter and tasty chocolate's flavor. Moreover, Temuco is one of the most silent cities at night because if you were on the bed, trying to sleep, you would easily hear the breeze and the horrific dog's bark.
Note: thank you very much "AlpheccaStar" by helping me, I'm totally learning from my mistakes