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Velectro Posted 19 years ago
Business & Finance

Another business mail

Hi,

I need a correction of this mail, especially about the tense:


Dear yyyyyy,

As I told you by phone all documentation has been sent.

Concerning the fair in Milan my chartered accoutant said that the best way to refund is including all in a bonus (like relocation one) after my starting date 1st of October.

I’m coming back in Bologna on Saturday, 25th August so I would be deligthed to meet you in Verona the following week.

Looking forward to meet you.

Regards

xxxxxx

Thanks in advance
  

Top answer

Dear yyyyyy, As I told you by phone all documentation has been sent. Kindly refer to our telephonic conversation, the documents has alredy been sent to you. Concerning the fair in Milan my chartered accoutant said that the best way to refund is including all in a bonus (like relocation one) after my starting date 1st of October.

— Rais

  • Dear yyyyyy, As I told you by phone all documentation has been sent.
  • Kindly refer to our telephonic conversation, the documents has alredy been sent to you.
  • Concerning the fair in Milan my chartered accoutant said that the best way to refund is including all in a bonus (like relocation one) after my starting date 1st of October.
  • I consulted my chartered accountant regarding reimbursement of the Air fare.
  • He suggested to include it in a bonus after my joining date.
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Dear yyyyyy,

As I told you by phone all documentation has been sent.

Kindly refer to our telephonic conversation, the documents has alredy been sent to you.

Concerning the fair in Milan my chartered accoutant said that the best way to refund is including all in a bonus (like relocation one) after my starting date 1st of October.
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