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Perfect Stranger Posted 14 years ago
Business & Finance
Another 2 sentences full of mumbo jumbo...
Hi,
Can you help me polish these sentences up... or rewrite them in a better way?
1. The loan will be arranged with following 2 ways from related banks.
2. Duties: To assign a working team with a coordinator, on behalf of the Government, to conduct all of the issues related to this document, including, but not limited to,
To me these sentences are utterly wrong but I can't come up with a decent correction.
Can you help me polish these sentences up... or rewrite them in a better way?
1. The loan will be arranged with following 2 ways from related banks.
2. Duties: To assign a working team with a coordinator, on behalf of the Government, to conduct all of the issues related to this document, including, but not limited to,
To me these sentences are utterly wrong but I can't come up with a decent correction.
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1. The loan will be arranged in one of the following two ways from related banks. 2.
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- The loan will be arranged in one of the following two ways from related banks.
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- Duties: To assign a working team with a coordin ator o n behalf of the Government, to conduct all issues related to this document, includi ng bu t not limited to...
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1. The loan will be arranged in one of the following two ways from related banks.
2. Duties: To assign a working team with a coordinator on behalf of the Government, to conduct all issues related to this document, including but not limited to...
2. Duties: To assign a working team with a coordinator on behalf of the Government, to conduct all issues related to this document, including but not limited to...
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Thanks MM.
Would you consider this one as a good alternative?
The loan shall be arranged under a twofold scheme.
Would you consider this one as a good alternative?
The loan shall be arranged under a twofold scheme.
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Understood.
I don't want to start a new topic so... let me continue this one.
The cost required to carry out all operations under this MOU shall be borne by each party separately. A party without any liability to compensate for the cost occurred by other party due to execute this MO
I don't want to start a new topic so... let me continue this one.
The cost required to carry out all operations under this MOU shall be borne by each party separately. A party without any liability to compensate for the cost occurred by other party due to execute this MO
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1. The article is unnecessary and unusual there.
2. 'the costs incurred by the other party'
3. Yes, or 'due to executing this'
4. The whole sentence is off. I suggest that this is what is meant:
One party has no liability to compensate any MOU execution costs incurred by the other party except on a voluntary basis.
2. 'the costs incurred by the other party'
3. Yes, or 'due to executing this'
4. The whole sentence is off. I suggest that this is what is meant:
One party has no liability to compensate any MOU execution costs incurred by the other party except on a voluntary basis.
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