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Ben9108 Posted 15 years ago
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Annual performance review
I would like to seek comments and better writing skill for the following sentences. Thanks
"The performance of Ms. YYY has been acceptable in 2000. Adequate experience and understanding of his duties are strong point. His personal health, self-discipline, erratic punctuality and supervision skill are significant weakness having rooms for improvement in future."
"The performance of Ms. YYY has been acceptable in 2000. Adequate experience and understanding of his duties are strong point. His personal health, self-discipline, erratic punctuality and supervision skill are significant weakness having rooms for improvement in future."
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The performance of Ms YYY has been acceptable in 2010 . Adequate experience and understanding of her duties are her strong points . Her personal health, self-discipline, erratic punctuality and supervisory skills are significant weaknesses offering room for improvement.
- The performance of Ms YYY has been acceptable in 2010 .
- Adequate experience and understanding of her duties are her strong points .
- Her personal health, self-discipline, erratic punctuality and supervisory skills are significant weaknesses offering room for improvement.
- I notice that you have mentioned personal health in both of the performance reviews you have submitted.
- In the US at least, such mention is inappropriate and irrelevant and would not be accepted by a superior.
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The performance of Ms YYY has been acceptable in 2010. Adequate experience and understanding of her duties are her strong points. Her personal health, self-discipline, erratic punctuality and supervisory skills are significant weaknesses offering room for improvement.
I notice that you have mentioned personal health in bot
I notice that you have mentioned personal health in bot
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Thanks for your comments and suggestion
Actually, her performance had been unsatisfactory in 2010. No any her strong aspects were found.
Can I write " Experience and understanding of her duties are good aspects."
I don't understand why personal health, self-discipline, erratic punctuality and supervisory skills cannot be classified as personal week ponits. Would you min
Actually, her performance had been unsatisfactory in 2010. No any her strong aspects were found.
Can I write " Experience and understanding of her duties are good aspects."
I don't understand why personal health, self-discipline, erratic punctuality and supervisory skills cannot be classified as personal week ponits. Would you min
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I don't understand why personal health, self-discipline, erratic punctuality and supervisory skills cannot be classified as personal week ponits.-- I said nothing like that. I said 'personal health'. Please re-read my post.
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