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New2grammar Posted 18 years ago
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annoying fly

I'm wondering what do you call the action of a fly that's annoying you by standing on your body and keeps coming back even after you swat at it?

I feel there are mistakes but can't find any.
Please check.
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Here is my attempt to improve you sentence. There isn't really much wrong with the original wording, except that it doesn't flow smoothly (for lack of a better term). I'm wondering what you call the behavior of a fly that annoys you by landing on you and keeps coming back even after you swat at it?

— RayH

  • Here is my attempt to improve you sentence.
  • There isn't really much wrong with the original wording, except that it doesn't flow smoothly (for lack of a better term).
  • I'm wondering what you call the behavior of a fly that annoys you by landing on you and keeps coming back even after you swat at it?
  • I'm wondering, what do you call the behavior of a fly that annoys you by landing on you and keeps coming back even after you swat at it?
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Here is my attempt to improve you sentence. There isn't really much wrong with the original wording, except that it doesn't flow smoothly (for lack of a better term).
I'm wondering what you call the behavior of a fly that annoys you by landing on you and keeps coming back even after you swat at it?
I'm wondering, what do you call the behavior of a fly that annoys you by landing
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