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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Business & Finance

announcment

Hi I need help with annoucing a promotion. here is my sample - could you please edit for me thank you kindly.

we are please to announce that Apple has been appointed to a new role as ------- commencing Aug 1.

is this sufficient?
  

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W e are please d to announce that Apple has been appointed to a new role as ------- , commencing Aug 1. Is Apple here a person or a company? Promotion normally applies to a person.

— Clive

  • W e are please d to announce that Apple has been appointed to a new role as ------- , commencing Aug 1.
  • Is Apple here a person or a company?
  • Promotion normally applies to a person.
  • It's better to use the person's first and last name.
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We are pleased to announce that Apple has been appointed to a new role as -------, commencing Aug 1.

Is Apple here a person or a company? Promotion normally applies to a person.
It's better to use the person's first and last name.
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apple is a person - what else should i say mention
thank you again
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What else would you like to say?
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