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Moguwai007 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Announcing of Change of Reservation System

Could you please check if the following expression is appropriate and intelligible for a description on a hotel website?

<Announcing of Change of Reservation System>
We changed reservation engines on September 1, 2014.
To cancel/change reservations made before the date, please follow the instructions on your Booking Confirmation e-mail. Thank your for your understanding.
  

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Angle brackets < ... > are not used to set off headings in English. You can use bold formatting, larger font size, case, other formatting.

— GPY

  • Angle brackets < ...
  • > are not used to set off headings in English.
  • You can use bold formatting, larger font size, case, other formatting.
  • I think that readers do not understand or care about "engines".
  • Changes to our reservation system We made some changes to our reservation system on September 1, 2014.
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Angle brackets < ... > are not used to set off headings in English. You can use bold formatting, larger font size, case, other formatting. I think that readers do not understand or care about "engines".

Changes to our reservation system
We made some changes to our reservation system on September 1, 2014. To cancel or change reservations made before
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