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Christine Christie Posted 5 years ago
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Announced
Is this sentence correct:
"The prime-minister publicly announced his new state secretary of foreign affairs to the people."
Or would it sound better if it was said:
The prime-minister publicly announced the people his new state secretary of foreign affairs."
Top answer
" As shown, but 'to the people' is really unnecessary. Also, it's a little iffy to say that someone announced someone . I think it would be better as ...
- " As shown, but 'to the people' is really unnecessary.
- Also, it's a little iffy to say that someone announced someone .
- I think it would be better as ...
- announced his appointment of a new secretary of foreign affairs.
- CJ
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Christine Christie"The prime-minister publicly announced to the people his new state secretary of foreign affairs."
As shown, but 'to the people' is really unnecessary.
Also, it's a little iffy to say that someone announced someone. I think it would be better
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