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Letter Writing
Annoucement : proofreading
can help me to proofread the below: -
Re : Working house starting on 15/9
Please be informed that, our working hour is scheduled as belows:-
xx Department : 8.45 tp 5.15 (Monday to Friday)
Alternate off on Saturday
1st, 3 rd & 5th = Offday
xx Department:same except rotation on 2nd & 4th saturday
Remarks : if 2nd or 4th Saturday is public holiday then you need to replace the working day on the previous saturday (EG. 2nd Saturday fall on public holiday then the replacement of working day is 1st Saturday)
TQ
Re : Working house starting on 15/9
Please be informed that, our working hour is scheduled as belows:-
xx Department : 8.45 tp 5.15 (Monday to Friday)
Alternate off on Saturday
1st, 3 rd & 5th = Offday
xx Department:same except rotation on 2nd & 4th saturday
Remarks : if 2nd or 4th Saturday is public holiday then you need to replace the working day on the previous saturday (EG. 2nd Saturday fall on public holiday then the replacement of working day is 1st Saturday)
TQ
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I have underlined some problems. Please fix them and re-post. You have made many typing mistakes.
- I have underlined some problems.
- Please fix them and re-post.
- You have made many typing mistakes.
- Always proofread your work before posting.
- 15 (Monday to Friday) Alternate off on Saturday 1st, 3 rd & 5th = Offday xx Department:same except rotation on 2nd & 4th saturday Remark s : if 2nd or 4th Saturday is public holiday then you need to replace the working day on the previous saturday (EG .
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I have underlined some problems. Please fix them and re-post. You have made many typing mistakes. Always proofread your work before posting. No one is interested in correcting your typing mistakes:
Re : Working house starting on 15/9
Please be informed that, our working hour is scheduled as belows:-
xx Department :
Re : Working house starting on 15/9
Please be informed that, our working hour is scheduled as belows
xx Department :
00
sorry for too many typing mistakes (it is the original text given to me)
Below is the text i've amended and hopefully you can help me to proofread it...tq
Re : New Office Working Hours - starting on 15 September 2011
Please be informed that our new working hours are scheduled as belows:
1) xx Department : 8.45 to 5.15 (Monday to Friday)
a) 1st, 3rd
Below is the text i've amended and hopefully you can help me to proofread it...tq
Re : New Office Working Hours - starting on 15 September 2011
Please be informed that our new working hours are scheduled as belows:
1) xx Department : 8.45 to 5.15 (Monday to Friday)
a) 1st, 3rd
00
Much better!
Re : New Office Working Hours - starting on 15 September 2011
Please be informed that our new working hours are scheduled as belows:
1) xx Department: 8.45 to 5.15 (Monday to Friday)
a) 1st, 3rd & 5th Saturday off
2) xx Department: same except rotation on 2nd & 4th Saturday
Remarks: if 2nd or
Re : New Office Working Hours - starting on 15 September 2011
Please be informed that our new working hours are scheduled as belows:
1) xx Department: 8.45 to 5.15 (Monday to Friday)
a) 1st, 3rd & 5th Saturday off
2) xx Department: same except rotation on 2nd & 4th Saturday
Remarks: if 2nd or
00
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