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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Annotation for the short film
Hi! I need an english-language annotation to send my short film to a festival.
I'm not a native speaker so please help to correct my mistakes and I will mention you in titles )
"Deep inside an abandoned industrial area, in a bottomless pit lies unknown danger... This is a dream, that a jealous guy Ilya sees. His beloved girl cheats on him with his best friend. Or does she? What if that is only an illusion? And the scary dream is a reality?"
I'm not a native speaker so please help to correct my mistakes and I will mention you in titles )
"Deep inside an abandoned industrial area, in a bottomless pit lies unknown danger... This is a dream, that a jealous guy Ilya sees. His beloved girl cheats on him with his best friend. Or does she? What if that is only an illusion? And the scary dream is a reality?"
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Deep inside an abandoned industrial area in a bottomless pit lies unknown danger—this is what Ilya sees in his dream. His girlfriend cheats on him with his best friend. Or does she?
- Deep inside an abandoned industrial area in a bottomless pit lies unknown danger—this is what Ilya sees in his dream.
- His girlfriend cheats on him with his best friend.
- Or does she?
- Is it only a jealous illusion or a reality?
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Deep inside an abandoned industrial area in a bottomless pit lies unknown danger—this is what Ilya sees in his dream. His girlfriend cheats on him with his best friend. Or does she? Is it only a jealous illusion or a reality?
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