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The bachelor thesis is focused on the influence od chain stores on retail stores in Jicín The main aim was to chart the situation of tradesman on the Czech market and notice the unequal competition between healthy food store and chain stores. For the purpose of this thesis a company selling healthy food called Slunecnice was chosen. The theoretical part is based on literature research and deals with terms and problems tied to chain stores. In tha practical part the company Slunecnice and its activity was introduced, then questionniare surveys follows. The survey was used to analyze customer, their habits and attitude to chain stores and retail stores. The end of this bachelor thesis contains overall evaluation of the situation and author´s own recommendation, which was based on on literature research and questionnaire survey.

I know, that almost nobody would say it like this during normal conversation, but its just translated annotation from my language :-) So I want to know, if there are bullsh*ts or not :-) Thaaanks guys! :-)