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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Grammar
Anniversary message
Kindly check if my grammar is correct, I'm not confident in writing my thoughts In English please help and feel free to correct me.
To the people who love's me dearly, let's all take a step back to a very short memory lane. It's been a year! What An awesome ride of life with the man I deeply love the man who never fails to make me laugh Hilariously with his singing dancing showing me all his talents and just simply being himself is damn funny! Thank you for a year of laughter and love ofcourse. I can't wait to spend more years, gazillion years with this man. It's amazing how time flies when you're in love.
I thank God for showering us both with so much love that it overflows.
To the people who love's me dearly, let's all take a step back to a very short memory lane. It's been a year! What An awesome ride of life with the man I deeply love the man who never fails to make me laugh Hilariously with his singing dancing showing me all his talents and just simply being himself is damn funny! Thank you for a year of laughter and love ofcourse. I can't wait to spend more years, gazillion years with this man. It's amazing how time flies when you're in love.
I thank God for showering us both with so much love that it overflows.
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This is very nice, short and sweet. I have made the corrections in red, however since you are only talking about the man you love, then how about changing your opening line to: To the man I love dearly. I put a comma after "love , of course" because that is where you can put you own personal emphasis on the word love then pause before you say "of course".
- This is very nice, short and sweet.
- I have made the corrections in red, however since you are only talking about the man you love, then how about changing your opening line to: To the man I love dearly.
- I put a comma after "love , of course" because that is where you can put you own personal emphasis on the word love then pause before you say "of course".
- To the people who love's love me dearly.
- L et's all take a step back to a very short memory lane.
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This is very nice, short and sweet.
I have made the corrections in red, however since you are only talking about the man you love, then how about changing your opening line to: To the man I love dearly.
I put a comma after "love, of course" because that is where you can put you own personal emphasis on the word love then p
I have made the corrections in red, however since you are only talking about the man you love, then how about changing your opening line to: To the man I love dearly.
I put a comma after "love, of course" because that is where you can put you own personal emphasis on the word love then p
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