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Naked chef Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing
Anniversary invitation letter
Dear all,
I would appreciate your kind help with correction or giving suggestions on this.
This is the invitation letter for an anniversary celebration. I need someone to help me to check my English.
To Mr/Msxxx,
Address:
INVITATION
Dear Mr/Msxxx,
We codially invite you to attend the celebration of 5th year anniversary of xx which will be held on August 22nd, 2012 at 5:00pm at (xxplace). *(There will be a singing and dancing performance of children from blind school and deaf school.) or *( The performance of singing and dancing of children from blind school and deaf school.) * ( You will see the performance singing and dancing of children from blind school and deaf school.)* The detailed programme are as follow:
5:00pm Opeing speech by Head of xx
5:15pm Giving speech by Country Director
5:30pm Performance by children
6:00pm Buffet
7:00pm Programme end
*We shall be deeply honored with your presence in this celebration.or * We look forward to your presence in this celebration.*
Sincerely,
Name:xx
Position:xx
Organisation:xx
* with blue font will tell you that I'm not sure which one is more appropiate. if you have better idea please let me know.
I would appreciate your kind help with correction or giving suggestions on this.
This is the invitation letter for an anniversary celebration. I need someone to help me to check my English.
To Mr/Msxxx,
Address:
INVITATION
Dear Mr/Msxxx,
We codially invite you to attend the celebration of 5th year anniversary of xx which will be held on August 22nd, 2012 at 5:00pm at (xxplace). *(There will be a singing and dancing performance of children from blind school and deaf school.) or *( The performance of singing and dancing of children from blind school and deaf school.) * ( You will see the performance singing and dancing of children from blind school and deaf school.)* The detailed programme are as follow:
5:00pm Opeing speech by Head of xx
5:15pm Giving speech by Country Director
5:30pm Performance by children
6:00pm Buffet
7:00pm Programme end
*We shall be deeply honored with your presence in this celebration.or * We look forward to your presence in this celebration.*
Sincerely,
Name:xx
Position:xx
Organisation:xx
* with blue font will tell you that I'm not sure which one is more appropiate. if you have better idea please let me know.
Top answer
Dear Mr/Msxxx, We cordially invite you to attend the celebration o f the 5th anniversary of xx , which will be held on Wednesday, August 22nd at 5:00 pm at xxplace . There will be a song and dance performance by children from the sight- and hearing-impaired schools . The detailed programme is as follows: 5:00 pm - Opening speech by Head of xx 5:15 pm - Speech by National Director 5:30 pm - Performance by children 6:00 pm - Buffet 7:00 pm - Programme end We would be honored by your presence at this celebration.
- Dear Mr/Msxxx, We cordially invite you to attend the celebration o f the 5th anniversary of xx , which will be held on Wednesday, August 22nd at 5:00 pm at xxplace .
- There will be a song and dance performance by children from the sight- and hearing-impaired schools .
- The detailed programme is as follows: 5:00 pm - Opening speech by Head of xx 5:15 pm - Speech by National Director 5:30 pm - Performance by children 6:00 pm - Buffet 7:00 pm - Programme end We would be honored by your presence at this celebration.
- Sincerely, xx xx xx
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Dear Mr/Msxxx,
We cordially invite you to attend the celebration of the 5th anniversary of xx, which will be held on Wednesday, August 22nd at 5:00 pm at xxplace . There will be a song and dance performance by children from the sight- and hearing-impaired schools. The detailed programme is as follows:
5:00 pm - Opening spe
We cordially invite you to attend the celebration of the 5th anniversary of xx, which will be held on Wednesday, August 22nd at 5:00 pm at xxplace . There will be a song and dance performance by children from the sight- and hearing-impaired schools. The detailed programme is as follows:
5:00 pm - Opening spe
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