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Asta Maria Posted 9 years ago
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Hi, please help me correct the below sentences if there any mistakes, thank you.
- Chuuta and the others are given the mission to protect the top scientist, Dr. Love. However, when they reach him, they are shocked by what they see.
- Chuuta and the others encounter a mysterious young man. However, his actions and words shock the rest as he turns out to be Dr. Love himself.
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The English is grammatically correct. The definite articles in "the mission" and "the top scientist" need to be justified by a prior context. I'm not totally certain who "the rest" refers to, or why it does not just say "them".
- The English is grammatically correct.
- The definite articles in "the mission" and "the top scientist" need to be justified by a prior context.
- I'm not totally certain who "the rest" refers to, or why it does not just say "them".
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The English is grammatically correct. The definite articles in "the mission" and "the top scientist" need to be justified by a prior context. I'm not totally certain who "the rest" refers to, or why it does not just say "them".
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