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HI, please help me correct the below sentences if there any mistakes, thank you.
1. In the year 2009, there were a series of mysterious yet gruesome deaths that were occurring on the streets of Shibuya.
2. There are two consecutive cases of strange deaths that are happening in Shibuya. Takuru decides to investigate deeper into the cases.
  

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1. In 2009, there was a series of mysterious, gruesome deaths in the streets of Shibuya. 2.

  • 1.
  • In 2009, there was a series of mysterious, gruesome deaths in the streets of Shibuya.
  • 2.
  • There are two consecutive strange deaths in Shibuya, and Takuru decides to investigate the cases.
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1. In 2009, there was a series of mysterious, gruesome deaths in the streets of Shibuya.
2. There are two consecutive strange deaths in Shibuya, and Takuru decides to investigate the cases.

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