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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
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Is this sentence ok?

A fantasy adventure series revolving around Yuri and the Volunteer Army he leads as they try to defeat the Black Army and bring peace to the world.
  

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This is a noun phrase, not a grammatically complete sentence. It may or may not be correct in context. Stylistically I prefer "the Volunteer Army that he leads".

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  • This is a noun phrase, not a grammatically complete sentence.
  • It may or may not be correct in context.
  • Stylistically I prefer "the Volunteer Army that he leads".
  • I'm not sure whether "Volunteer Army" should be capitalised.
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This is a noun phrase, not a grammatically complete sentence. It may or may not be correct in context.

Stylistically I prefer "the Volunteer Army that he leads".

I'm not sure whether "Volunteer Army" should be capitalised.
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