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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
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Hi, please help me correct the below sentences if there are any mistakes, thank you.

1.Shindou has been behaving strangely. He thinks about why his relationship with Shiho has reached this current stage.
2. Miyakoshi can feel that something is missing in her dating relationship with Daisuke. In other to find the answer, she does something drastic.
  

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Anonymous P lease help me correct the below sentences below if there are any mistakes . T hank you. The only one that doesn't seem quite right is He thinks about why his relationship with Shiho has reached this current stage.

  • Anonymous P lease help me correct the below sentences below if there are any mistakes .
  • T hank you.
  • The only one that doesn't seem quite right is He thinks about why his relationship with Shiho has reached this current stage.
  • It seems the boldface parts could be improved.
  • "this" with "current" is almost redundant, really.
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AnonymousPlease help me correct the below sentences below if there are any mistakes. Thank you.
The only one that doesn't seem quite right is

He thinks about why his relationship with Shiho has reached this

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