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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Animax

HI, please help me correct the below sentences if there any mistakes, thank you

1. It turns out that Yayoi is also able to achieve Divine Union. Matoi hears from her father regarding her mother for the first time.
2. Matoi goes out with her father on a shopping trip. While at the observation tower, they are attacked by the evil spirit.
  

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The sentences are grammatically correct. Is this a summary of a story? If so, the two parts of #1 do not seem to be logically connected.

  • The sentences are grammatically correct.
  • Is this a summary of a story?
  • If so, the two parts of #1 do not seem to be logically connected.
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The sentences are grammatically correct. Is this a summary of a story? If so, the two parts of #1 do not seem to be logically connected.
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Thank you sir. Basically, it's not a summary of a story. It's two different parts.

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