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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Hi, are these sentences grammatically correct?

1. Feeling bad making Daisuke eat her chocolate all the time, Miyakoshi wants to date Daisuke as a way to improve her cooking.
2. While Sayuri is on sick leave, the restaurant is filled with a horrifying atmosphere. Feeling responsible, Adachi decides to visit her.
  

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(1) is theoretically grammatical but stylistically poor. (2) is OK grammatically, but "horrifying atmosphere" seems more extreme than expected and may not be the correct choice of words.

— GPY

  • (1) is theoretically grammatical but stylistically poor.
  • (2) is OK grammatically, but "horrifying atmosphere" seems more extreme than expected and may not be the correct choice of words.
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(1) is theoretically grammatical but stylistically poor.

(2) is OK grammatically, but "horrifying atmosphere" seems more extreme than expected and may not be the correct choice of words.
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Ok. Thank you and I just have another question for the first sentence:

Feeling bad making Daisuke eat her chocolate all the time: (Do I need to include "s" for eat? Should be eat or eats?
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AnonymousFeeling bad making Daisuke eat her chocolate all the time: (Do I need to include "s" for eat? Should be eat or eats?
It should be "eat". It is an infinitive (pattern is "make someone do something) not an inflected verb.

A small improvement would be:

Feeling bad about making Daisuke eat her chocolate all the time, Miyakoshi
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