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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

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Hi, is this sentence correct?

With a bat in his hands, Acchan approaches Sakamoto while he is giving his speech. However, Sakamoto manages to stop him.
  

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I see no error but if you used the past tense of the verbs, it would be more natural to me.

  • I see no error but if you used the past tense of the verbs, it would be more natural to me.
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I see no error but if you used the past tense of the verbs, it would be more natural to me. Emotion: smile

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