Pieter Posted 23 years ago
And this one? Bad, very bad?
A poem
A wanderer’s stick is the broom in my mother’s hand.
My grandfather has wandered all around the word,
sweeping.
Stooping.
The whole village’s planting carrots in the fields.
Glimmering oil lamp. The calmness’
crying.
Trembling.
The countryside’s fool on a meter high box.
Dialing on a plate. A child is
waking.
Laughing.
A wanderer’s stick is the broom in my mother’s hand.
My grandfather has wandered all around the word,
sweeping.
Stooping.
The whole village’s planting carrots in the fields.
Glimmering oil lamp. The calmness’
crying.
Trembling.
The countryside’s fool on a meter high box.
Dialing on a plate. A child is
waking.
Laughing.
Top answer
I don't think it's bad. I like it.
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Maybe I have to read this one again to be able to comment on, to get the main idea.
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