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Pamela81 Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

And then the silence

Hi!

I wish to know if it is possible and is makes sense such a sentence:

"You got the stand design more than one month ago, we spent much time and money working on it and then the silence. I tried to call you and wrote you several e-mails but in vain."

Could it work?

Thanks

Pamela
  

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Hi Pamela - I've made a few comments. "You got the stand design more than one month ago , (comma splice - make separate sentences, or use a conjunction) we spent much (a lot of) time and money working on it and then the silence . (This does not make sense.

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  • Hi Pamela - I've made a few comments.
  • "You got the stand design more than one month ago , (comma splice - make separate sentences, or use a conjunction) we spent much (a lot of) time and money working on it and then the silence .
  • (This does not make sense.
  • ) I tried to call you and wrote you several e-mails but in vain.
  • )
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Hi Pamela - I've made a few comments.

"You got the stand design more than one month ago, (comma splice - make separate sentences, or use a conjunction) we spent much (a lot of) time and money working on it and then the silence. (This
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