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Jackson6612 Posted 18 years ago
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...and the favor of admitting in the cadre

Please correct the text:
Thanks a lot for giving me the wings and the favor of admitting in the cadre. Yes, I can see Restricted Area section above the mentioned title. I'm grateful to you for conferring upon me this privilege.
  

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Unsure of what your trying to say in the first part of the sentence. The second part should be: Yes, i can see the Restricted Area section above the afore mentioned title. I'm grateful that you would confer this privilege upon me.

— Ba1Ley

  • Unsure of what your trying to say in the first part of the sentence.
  • The second part should be: Yes, i can see the Restricted Area section above the afore mentioned title.
  • I'm grateful that you would confer this privilege upon me.
  • I really need to know in what context it is being used.
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Unsure of what your trying to say in the first part of the sentence.
The second part should be:

Yes, i can see the Restricted Area section above the afore mentioned title. I'm grateful that you would confer this privilege upon me.
Sorry i can't help more.I really need to know in what context it is being used.
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