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Navitasan Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

And she didn't find out about it

Which are correct:


1) Don wrote a short story about Jane without mentioning her by name but Jane found out about it. The person who wrote a short story about her without her finding out was Tom.


2) Don wrote a short story about Jane without mentioning her by name but Jane found out about it. The person who wrote a short story about her but she didn't find out about it was Tom.


3) Don wrote a short story about Jane without mentioning her by name but Jane found out about it. The person who wrote a short story about her and she didn't find out about it was Tom.


Gratefully,

Navi.

  

Top answer

1) Correct, but you mean 'Don', not 'Tom'. You have also omitted the information that she was not mentioned by name. 2) and 3) are both incorrect.

  • 1) Correct, but you mean 'Don', not 'Tom'.
  • You have also omitted the information that she was not mentioned by name.
  • 2) and 3) are both incorrect.
  • You could improve this approach by punctuation, eg The person who wrote a short story about her (but she didn't find out about it) was Tom.
  • But this is still not a great sentence.
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1) Correct, but you mean 'Don', not 'Tom'. You have also omitted the information that she was not mentioned by name.

2) and 3) are both incorrect. You could improve this approach by punctuation,

eg The person who wrote a short story about her (but she didn't find out about it) was Tom.

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